Ayzintion City - The Double Purchase

[Charlieje (imported)]

One of your best, Nathan!

THANK YOU for... well, I don't want to give the story away, so just THANK YOU for how you treated that younger boy!

[noblee (imported)]

Well I am giving up on complimenting Nathan on his stories. He is a god among men. Glad to see you are back Nathan!

[colin (imported)]

I don't normally post for Nathan's stories even though they are always beautifully crafted, as one would expect from a master story-teller, they are a bit too strong for me.

However, this story although in the normal vein was something really special.

Thanks and well done!

LOL

[Slammr (imported)]

I agree. Nathan is a master story teller-especially of hot stories. Although I don't find time to read many stories, I never miss one of Nathan's. This one was especially good.

[Nathan (imported)]

Just "thanks." Some stories "work" and some stories "don't" and sometimes its hard to know. The feedback is not important to some authors, perhaps, but it is to me. I really appreciate the comments, and without them I wouldn't bother writing, at least not as much and not as often.

Its funny, but it only takes a few minutes, to drop a comment. For me, it doesnt even matter if its pro or con, since every comment helps to shape the stories to come. Or should I say, cum. <grin>

I really worked this one...re-wrote the ending again and again. Of course, at first, I double chopped the double purchase, but as I re-read it I made the one character younger and then tried to come at the reader with the QUESTION.

One thing some might miss, is that Carlos, the cutter in the story, was obviously paid more to make the cut than not. We know that from other stories in the series, where the price of cutting is discussed. Sure, when the "festival" is going on its all for free, but thats a rare thing and normally, its a very costly procedure. So, just imagine what he was thinking, as he held the knife for a sure payoff, while he looked at the measly 5000 degos from the pleading owner. What would YOU have done? <grin>

[ringlo (imported)]

I really worked this one...re-wrote the ending again and again.

It was worth the effort. I loved the story, especially with this ending.

Thanks, Nathan.

ringlo