As some of you might recall I had a post up before I left about seeking help for a Cuckold/Castration themed story I was hoping to write.
In a nutshell, it involves a young married couple who start out seeking more sexual fun and gradually enter the swinging/cuckold lifestyle... which leads to chastity and eventual castration of the hubby in the story and continues on from there.
I wanted it to be all consensual between the two main characters and not just end when the hubby loses his balls, as I see so many stories do at that point.
As my original post seems to have been removed, I thought I'd try again see what people think or if they would be interested in helping me write what I think could be a great story.
I'm only starting out in writing and this is a learning experience for me, so your input and feedback would be a HUGE help;
So far I have written a first draft of the Prologue, would love to hear what you all think;
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Prologue
Nicole and I first met at a frat party in college. I can still remember how stunning she looked that night, and how it took me three beers to finally work up the courage to speak to her. I used some cheesy pick-up line which made her laugh, and made me inwardly cringe.
She told me shed heard that old line a hundred times before, but since I was cute shed let it pass. I almost gasped with relief when she accepted the beer I handed her and hoped she didnt notice how nervous I was.
We spent the rest of the party doing shots and getting to know each other. Turns out we had a lot in common; we took the same Sociology class, were both closet geeks and were even from the same state well sort of, her family spent part of their winters in Arizona.
I got my first taste of her wild streak while I was walking her back to her dorm that night. She gave me a mischievous smile (something I would be seeing at lot more of in the future) and before I knew what she meant by it, we were already sneaking inside the campus gym. Snickering like a pair of misbehaving pranksters we stumbled around in the dark until we came to the swimming pool.
Thinking we heard someone approaching we stayed low and tried hard not to laugh to loudly. Nicole took my hand in hers and led us over to the diving tower where the darkness kept us from being seen. As we sat by the edge of the pool, I figured it was now or never. Brushing her blonde hair from her eyes I leaned in to kiss her, as our feet swayed in the warm water.
One perfect moment later, Nicole was staring back at me biting her lip in a way that suggested she just had another wicked idea. Without a word she stood up and lifted her small pink t-shirt over her head. I sat looking up at her and my jaw almost fell into the water as she unclipped her lacy black bra, revealing her perfect breasts.
Laughing softly at me expression, Nicole began to unbutton her jeans and said, Ever been skinny dipping before? I just sat looking up at her and croaked out a soft N umm I ah no
She snickered again and kissed my forehead as she slid her jeans down her long smooth legs. It helps if you take your clothes off first she teased, snapping me back to reality.
I just nodded silently and started to fumble at the buttons on my shirt, it was all I could do to hide how nervous I was. Nicole seemed to enjoy my nervousness though; like she had seen plenty of guys like me go all anxious around a pretty girl. Covering her breasts with one hand she used the other to take her panties off, wiggling her hips as they slid down her thighs.
She held onto my now bare shoulder for balance, her breasts just inches from my face while she stepped out of her panties and dropped them on the tiled floor next to her other clothes.
Nicole sat back down beside me as I unbuttoned my jeans, she didnt seem to mind the obvious bulge in my shorts as she ran her hand over my chest. She kissed me on the cheek and slid slowly into the water. I watched her fix her soaking wet hair for a moment, then took of my shorts, tossed them with the rest of my clothes and quickly joined her in the water, in the vain hope my hard-on wouldnt be as obvious.
I swam to where Nicole was and wrapped my arms around her and we shared a passionate kiss. The water was crystal clear and her body seemed to glisten in the pale blue light. Nicole was even more beautiful than I could have imagined, I no longer felt nervous as we ran our hands over each others bodies, it felt like I was in heaven.
Our bliss was crudely shattered by the sound of metal doors opening and a bright light being shone in our eyes. The next few minutes were awkward to say the least, as the security guard threatened to call the police if we didnt stop what we were doing. We both scrambled out of the water and back into our clothes, laughing the entire time.
Luckily for us, the security guard was the sympathetic type and let Nicole and I both off with only a stern lecture. We walked back to my dorm in our damp clothes as the sun came up, our arms around each other to keep warm.
There in my bed Nicole and I made love for the first time. It was made all the more memorable by the fact my roommate could have walked in and found us having sex at any moment, but thankfully we were spared a second round of embarrassment. Thinking back on it now, Nicoles adventurous streak was starting to rub off on me even then.
Fast forward five years later and that same wild girl I met in college is now my wife.
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