Need edit/spellcheck/feedback for Not Just a Circ part 2

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Hey guys,

I got a couple of emails recently asking me to finish the story "Not Just a Circumcision - Part 1 (https://eunuchworld.co/s13327)" (penec/straight) I never got a chance to write the second part, but now I've dug up my old drafts and decided to finish it. Although actually I rewrote the whole thing. The first part was well received (since people write me about it almost 4 years later),so I don't want to disappoint and would like it if someone could gimme feedback or suggest edits etc.

Not sure if admins would approve to posting the whole text here so if you'd like to read the draft, please send me a PM or email (email is in the header of the original story).

If nobody replies I'll probably post what I have this weekend.

Thanks!

[asphalt-cowboy (imported)]

"Not Just a Circumcision - Part 1

" is my favorite story since I discovered it, years ago. The story evolves gradually. The descriptions are just so detailed as need to be, no more and no less. The end has a fantastic intensity. Every time I read it I feel like I live those moments myself.

Since then I wondered if there was ever part two. On one hand I wish the story to continue. On the other hand, I am afraid that the second part will not rise to the former. First is a true work of literary art, and I know it is hard to create a sequel to the same level.

Whether you succeed or fail to live up to expectations, I'm glad you're still with us and to have the opportunity to give you my thanks.

[Ernie of Maine (imported)]

KA.dick I just read your store I,m hooked where is part 2 please. Ernie

Hey guys,

I got a couple of emails recently asking me to finish the story "Not Just a Circumcision - Part 1 (https://eunuchworld.co/s13327)" (penec/straight) I never got a chance to write the second part, but now I've dug up my old drafts and decided to finish it. Although actually I rewrote the whole thing. The first part was well received (since people write me about it almost 4 years later),so I don't want to disappoint and would like it if someone could gimme feedback or suggest edits etc.

Not sure if admins would approve to posting the whole text here so if you'd like to read the draft, please send me a PM or email (email is in the header of the original story).

If nobody replies I'll probably post what I have this weekend.

Thanks!

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Yay thank you guys! I've always had a continuation in my mind and drafted it several times but it never worked well enough. Only now I put together something I'm satisfied with. It's actually a 3-parter now, with part 3 being a rather short epilogue.

So Asphalt and Ernie, can I send you the drafts? Or can you PM me your mails, if you'd like to see them that is?

[ka.dick. (imported)]

I've sent the draft to 2 people last week, didn't hear back yet. Anyone else who'd be willing to provide feedback or help?

[C&TL2745 (imported)]

I've sent the draft to 2 people last week, didn't hear back yet. Anyone else who'd be willing to provide feedback or help?

I'll take a look. PM me for my e-mail

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Thanks. I need to get to postcount of 5 to be able to send PMs though, so gonna spam here a bit. Sorry.

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Ok maybe I'm stupid but I can't find the option to send PMs...

Sandi could you drop me an email instead? Users can send me email directly from here and it's also on the original story (https://eunuchworld.co/s13327). Thanks again...

[kristoff]

Ok maybe I'm stupid but I can't find the option to send PMs...

Sandi could you drop me an email instead? Users can send me email directly from here and it's also on the original story (https://eunuchworld.co/s13327). Thanks again...

click on "notifications" at the top of the page

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Yay now it's working. Didn't even see the 'send message' link on the users profiles before.