Something I have not seen done yet

[Laryagar (imported)]

I am thinking about it, was debating on keeping it more impersonal and clinical, as it is, or go more in-depth with perhaps changing the perspective to Subject A as he watches the others being demonstrated on.

Dialogue is another thing, I am rarely satisfied with the dialogue I write, I am thinking I should place more direct dialogue in the story but I feel that the dialogue I do put in will seem stilted or not natural enough.

Laryagar

P.S.

Same situation for the first story idea I posted in this thread, I have a lot of the scenes in the first story choreographed but the dialogue poses a hang-up.

BTW, I may change the name of one of the people in story idea number one to Tom, as per a request from a reader.

[serb (imported)]

I am not sure if really any of the contestants are in fear of their prostate being attacked, most do not know it is there or its possible effects.

All they know is the fear of being topped by someone in such a way in a public arena. The rest of the forced ejaculations are to be more revelations of their own weaknesses in this regard.

Laryagar

I like the idea of constraining the tube that connects the protrate to the penis, There was a very nice story about a gay basher who was in hospital for a minor operation and while he was under a remotely controled valye was pot into it.This was turned off so he couldn't climax. A coup;e of his girl friends were in on the punishment and they were willing to be fucked by him but of course it was all very frustaring for him. Eventually he discussed the situation with his doctor who was the person who had inserted the device. The doctor explained that this can ghappenafter a simple operation but there seems to be a strange cure he needs to have sex with a man and getthe man to fuck him. This gets any blockage removed sio he can go on with normal sex. The man refused to try this and got more and more frustrated, Eventually he asked the doctor idf he couldorganise it so no one knew. Well the doctor organised it but insured that secret recordings were made. The valve was turned on and the queer basher had a complete climax. However the valve was turned off again and six months later he had another go. To cut a long story short he was only able to climax but gay activities. Finally the records were shown to his gaybashing mates!

[Laryagar (imported)]

Sounds like a good story. In the fight story everyone in the arean knows it is a possibility that they could be down there and knows if they lose what could happen.

Some of the competitors are more predators than others and know how to press the right buttons even on a resisting victim, even if they are not gay they know how to humilaite well.

Laryagar

P.S.

In the second story the device uses the victim's own muscles in that area that helps keep the urine and the reproductive system separated. I like my little device because it could be used and removed with no visibled sign it was there.

[Douglas (imported)]

Were you aware that much of what you fantasize actually occurs when one undergoes a TURP - a transuretheral resectioning procedure - which is done to open up an enlarged prostate so that urine from the bladder can get through to the penis, and out of the body? After this procedure, one often ejaculates backward, with the semen flowing into the bladder, and out that way. I've had it done, and it's really much neater and cleaner that way.

Doug

[Bagoas (imported)]

Laryagar, you might want to read my four-part story "Peninsular Games" which contains a lot of similar action, though the major protagonists are gay.It purports to be part of the diary of one Kraton, a spectator from Nemekha at the 100th Peninsular games. The evenys described are boxing, wrestling, and pakration, all of which involve ball-busting and rape amidst sundry other kinds of mayhem.