Thanks for the compliment. This story just sorta "came" to me...the idea of it all like a flash in the night. I could see it...visualize it. It all started with an email, and a picture, and the picture gave me the creeps and then once I had the feeling the story just happened.
Ah, what was the picture you ask? Well, remember, it was Halloween night, and I got this photo in the mail from my brother and it depicts what they claim is a real ghost sitting by a window, whispering in a very low murmur. Yeah..I know...I'm as sceptical as the rest of you, but I did look, and at first I didnt see anything, much less hear anything. But, if you enlarge the image to full screen and study it for a while it just stands out and once you see it then its really obvious. Concentrate around the window and you will see it. I pushed up the volume and heard the damn thing, and thats when it all just gave me the chills and so I decided to start writing then and there.
Ok..OK...yeah...the picture that started the story. Its loaded here, if anyone is interested:
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Again, thanks for the note. I enjoyed this one, the story and all of it, and I hope others will too even though Halloween has past.
Nathan