I found one of your stories in the fiction archive and really liked it, so much so in fact I decided to have a go at re-writing it for fun. I have a passion for writing but so far haven't quite got the skill to tackle a whole story of my own, but hopefully that will change soon and I'll be posting my own up here.
Anyway, the story I re-worked was called "Melaney's Surprise". As I mentioned I re-wrote some elements of it and changed a few bits here and there, but by and large the main story is pretty much as you wrote it.
If you have would like to take a look at the "new" version or have no objections to me posting it up here, then let me know.
P.S.
I changed the spelling of the Title to avoid confusion with your story, it's now called "Melanie's Surprise".