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A message for Kortpeel

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Not sure if this is the place to post this, but after trying to send a message directly and not having any luck I thought I'd try here.

I found one of your stories in the fiction archive and really liked it, so much so in fact I decided to have a go at re-writing it for fun. I have a passion for writing but so far haven't quite got the skill to tackle a whole story of my own, but hopefully that will change soon and I'll be posting my own up here.

Anyway, the story I re-worked was called "Melaney's Surprise". As I mentioned I re-wrote some elements of it and changed a few bits here and there, but by and large the main story is pretty much as you wrote it.

If you have would like to take a look at the "new" version or have no objections to me posting it up here, then let me know.

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I changed the spelling of the Title to avoid confusion with your story, it's now called "Melanie's Surprise".

:)
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Kynetic01 (imported) wrote: Sun Jan 27, 2013 6:27 am I found one of your stories in the fiction archive and really liked it, so much so in fact I decided to have a go at re-writing it for fun. I have a passion for writing but so far haven't quite got the skill to tackle a whole story of my own, but hopefully that will change soon and I'll be posting my own up here.

Anyway, the story I re-worked was called "Melaney's Surprise". As I mentioned I re-wrote some elements of it and changed a few bits here and there, but by and large the main story is pretty much as you wrote it.

If you have would like to take a look at the "new" version or have no objections to me posting it up here, then let me know.

:)

Hi Kynetic 01,

First of all thank you for the feedback and I am happy that you liked the story. You are more than welcome to rewrite the story and post it on the archive. I look forward to reading it. And I wish you every success with your own stories.

Regards

Kortpeel
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Hi there,

Thanks for the message, I hadn't expected such a fast response.

I'll try and get it up straight away, I hope you enjoy the re-write as much as I enjoyed the original.

:)
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Story sent and waiting on approval. I've no idea how ling that might take, but I hope its posted up there quickly :)
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It will show up next Friday provided there are no issues with it. I too look forward to reading it.
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Thanks, I can't wait to see it up :)
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I was jjust wondering, did the story go up, or was it ok?

:)
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New story postings were a bit delayed.

My fault for distracting our new Editor.
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hahaha thats ok :P
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