How do you take off your underwear when your legs are chained?

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How do you take off your underwear when your legs are chained?

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From "For Your Own Good" (part 1) by Paolo:

Michael looked around, and hesitated. Slowly, he pulled off his briefs and sat, naked and humiliated, in the chair. He waited, staring at the short-chained manacles that bound his legs.
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happousai (imported) wrote: Sat Oct 05, 2002 8:54 am Michael looked around, and hesitated. Slowly, he pulled off his briefs and sat, naked and humiliated, in the chair. He waited, staring at the short-chained manacles that bound his legs.

It's obvious, Happousai! He took them off over his head . . . :D

(Sorry, I just couldn't resist)

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A minor glitch in one of the finest stories on the Archive. (I think it is THE best.) I have tried several times to convince Paolo to do some minor editing so that it could be submitted for print publication. It’s already much better written and has no more sex and/or violence than some highly acclaimed pieces that are already out there.

Most writers make minor mistakes as they go. I always set anything important aside for a while so that I can read it with fresh eyes and catch little things like this one. Paolo would most likely have caught it himself if he had waited a week or so before posting so that he could have reread it.
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Re: How do you take off your underwear when your legs are chained?

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Here's how:

"he RIPPED
happousai (imported) wrote: Sat Oct 05, 2002 8:54 am off his briefs and sat, naked and humiliated, in the chair. He waited, staring at the short-chained manacles that bound his legs.
"

A single word cures that problem!

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Post by mcfogel (imported) »

No, no, no.

Unhooked the manacles to take them off and then put it back on.

What am I going to do with you guys?
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And to think two other people read it before I posted it!
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An example of why much time should be utilized in posting/publishing lengthy stories.

Each chapter needs to be read, reread and then proofread despite the criticism of readers demanding haste.

As stated, the correction is simple..., if caught before hand.

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Post by A-1 (imported) »

...he pulled them off with his teeth, shredding them at the same time.

Obviously somebody would not chain his feet and leave his hands free, would they?

I wouldn't. Would you?

;) A-1 ;)
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There should be a bitof room between the leg and the chain or leg iron. You push and pull your short through this opening. I am doing it regularly whenever my master puts me in irons.
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slave24574 (imported) wrote: Sat Oct 12, 2002 12:00 am There should be a bitof room between the leg and the chain or leg iron. You push and pull your short through this opening. I am doing it regularly whenever my master puts me in irons.
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