Turn of the Demon By: humlind1

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Turn of the Demon By: humlind1

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This is a very powerful story. I would have reviewed it sooner but I went out to eat with my brother Friday for the first time in months and I over exerted myself.
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humlind1 came to me with the question of whether or not to write it. The first bit of his story really hooked me. I encouraged him to continue. When he was finished I helped edit it up a bit, as English is not his first language.

Despite English not being his mother tongue, he has a real gift, and it shows through.

It takes an incredible amount of courage to write what he did, and I know what it is like. He actually inspired me to write up my own story. I am so greatful to him and his strength. I hope everyone reads and learns from him.

Don't forget to give his story a read. It is worth your time.

Here is the link;

https://eunuchworld.co/s13898 <- Click it!
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curious_guy

Thank you, Its great you found it interesting.

That meen so much. And as your skills as a writter are up in the sky. up there with Cainanite and Sander. I cant say it make me trully glad.

I trully feel included. And as i told cainanite, as my travel tru my inner body. Is trully a hard but good, thing.

So thanks a lot for the feedback.

PS: you shoud allways, but your brother in front of reading a story.
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Great story... real, bracing...
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With me I often don't read enough, and should endeavour to more. I should give your story some time. Firstly, the achievement of writing a story outside of your mother tongue is really something. I cannot comprehend it. Secondly, the concept of us all having a demon of some sort is worth exploring. Perhaps that is just called being human. Thirdly, it seems to be a common theme that writing - especially personal writing - is the best possible therapy. I am a strong supporter of that theory.
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Enjoyed your *article* *story* very much. It is hard to go through those things but you seem to be coming out if as a stronger sperson.
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Time will tell gandalf.

But what i can say. Is the things i have gone tru. Have at least Made me the one i am.

Now i just whant to move forwared, and become my self. get in tuch, with my self. And see what that will bring.

It was a great thing for me, to show people what i have gone tru.

Now i will spend my time, adressing, the Demon i have. And find how to go tru the rest of my life.

The questions i have had, remain the same. But i hope to get to know my rage. And live with it.

there are no magic involved, that much i do know. By writting, stories, i hope to find a way tru my one mind. tru the walls i have build up.

And maby, just maby. I can determind what is best. castration, not castration. And if i can be what i whant to be. a Strong Man. but still in tuch with all of my self.

I thank you all for the nice feedback. I feel humble, and happy. But for me its just the first small step.

hopefully, the future will show me the stairs into a regular life. Where my demon is a part of me. But not all of what people see.

I will for allways, be greatfull, for what EA, and the people here have sad and done for me.
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