This is a very good story. I cannot wait to find out if Terry/Terri uses the device. If he/she does will he/she regret it. What kind of adjustments will he/she have to make?
I would like to know why the seller used it on two of his four sons. Why didn't he use it on all four sons? How did the sons he used it on fare? Did they adjust well?
I am assuming that using the device is legal in that world. How often do parents use similar devices in that world? Why do they usually use it? Are the boys that have the devices used on them allowed to skip showering with other boys? If not, how do the other boys react?
Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
I'm also pleased to see that this story may have new parts coming while the main character may have parts going... 
I like Atreyu88's writing very much. I'd love to see more of it soon.
Thanks Atreyu!
And, thank-you curious_guy for writing this review. It is always awesome to see feedback on stories. We need a lot more of this. Reputation tag for you!
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Here's the link to the story.
CLICK -> https://eunuchworld.co/s13868
I like Atreyu88's writing very much. I'd love to see more of it soon.
Thanks Atreyu!
And, thank-you curious_guy for writing this review. It is always awesome to see feedback on stories. We need a lot more of this. Reputation tag for you!
EDIT:
Here's the link to the story.
CLICK -> https://eunuchworld.co/s13868
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
I wonder if the man who used the device on two of his boys took one or both of the other two boys to the hospital for a similar procedure. The man's brother used it on one son. Did the brother have other sons? If he did, what happened to them? I would like to know how many names are engraved on the device.
Maybe Atreyu88 could write a series of vignettes (a few paragraphs or more each) about all the boys the device was used on. He could tell why the boy's parents used it and how the boy adjusted to his new status. He could tell how the boy's friends and other boys reacted when they saw what happened to the boy.
Maybe Atreyu88 could write a series of vignettes (a few paragraphs or more each) about all the boys the device was used on. He could tell why the boy's parents used it and how the boy adjusted to his new status. He could tell how the boy's friends and other boys reacted when they saw what happened to the boy.
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
With help from C.G. I've written and submiited Pink Boy Part 2. With luck it will be posted in a day or two. I hope you like it.
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
Part two is a good continuation to the story. I like how Atreyu88 implies that the device has some sort of evil power. I hope that Terry will meet and talk to boys who have been penectomized with a penectomizer and some who have been penectomized surgically.
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
Pink Boy - Part 1 now has five stars with 13 ratings. Pink Boy - Part 2 now has five stars with eight ratings.
I hope that some of the people who gave these story parts five stars will add a review to this thread. I want to encourage Atreyu88 to write more parts to this story and to write other stories.
Pink Boy - Part 1 shows up in the author index under Atreyu88 but not in the alphabetical index. To read Pink Boy - Part 2, you will have to click on the url in this message or the url in the Some new stories thread.
Pink Boy - Part 1:
https://eunuchworld.co/s13868
Pink Boy - Part 2:
https://eunuchworld.co/s13943
I hope that some of the people who gave these story parts five stars will add a review to this thread. I want to encourage Atreyu88 to write more parts to this story and to write other stories.
Pink Boy - Part 1 shows up in the author index under Atreyu88 but not in the alphabetical index. To read Pink Boy - Part 2, you will have to click on the url in this message or the url in the Some new stories thread.
Pink Boy - Part 1:
https://eunuchworld.co/s13868
Pink Boy - Part 2:
https://eunuchworld.co/s13943
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
I hav really enjoyed both parts of Pink Boy. I will be looking for the next installment. I actually think he would love to have his cock removed. Perhaps he would prefer his mother to do the job.
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Re: Pink Boy - Part 1 [G] By: Atreyu88
curious_guy (imported) wrote: Wed Dec 05, 2012 1:50 am Part two is a good continuation to the story. I like how Atreyu88 implies that the device has some sort of evil power. I hope that Terry will meet and talk to boys who have been penectomized with a penectomizer and some who have been penectomized surgically.
I don't think the device would have any actual intrinsic power. But to a boy it certainly might seem that it did. If we lived in a world where such tools really existed I think most boys would be totally horrified. But I think a sizable minority would be both horrified and intrigued. I think a small minority of boys would think it was cool the coolest thing ever.