Mistaken Paternity

C van D (imported)
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Mistaken Paternity

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Some long time ago I wrote "Mistaken Paternity" to give myself a break from Simon and his unending adventures. The context was a series of reports in the British press concerning a pregnant schoolgirl who named an 11-year-old boy as the father of her unborn child.

In real life the story petered out after a week or two. I ventured to write a screenplay portraying what MIGHT have happened next.

The screenplay did in fact reach the Fiction Archive. However, in the re-vamping of EA, it got lost.

With encouragement from my friend Cainanite and others (to whom I owe a lot) I've re-written the piece from memory. Inevitably there have been detail changes, but members who like to read about preteen boys having their balls pricked won't be disappointed.

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I still don't know how that happened, because I remember reading it more than once, so it was on the server at some point in time. :(
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I do have a copy of the original story. If I'd known, I would have sent that in.
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BossTamsin (imported) wrote: Sun Aug 12, 2012 9:16 am I do have a copy of the original story. If I'd known, I would have sent that in.

Send it anyway. I'll add it as the original, and keep the revised too.

Send it to me at eafictionarchive (at) gmail (dot) com.

Please...

I'm loading up the few new stories I have this weekend. It would be a good time to do it.
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C van D (imported) wrote: Sun Aug 12, 2012 5:56 am Some long time ago I wrote "Mistaken Paternity" to give myself a break from Simon and his unending adventures. The context was a series of reports in the British press concerning a pregnant schoolgirl who named an 11-year-old boy as the father of her unborn child.

In real life the story petered out after a week or two. I ventured to write a screenplay portraying what MIGHT have happened next.

The screenplay did in fact reach the Fiction Archive. However, in the re-vamping of EA, it got lost.

With encouragement from my friend Cainanite and others (to whom I owe a lot) I've re-written the piece from memory. Inevitably there have been detail changes, but members who like to read about preteen boys having their balls pricked won't be disappointed.

C van D

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I looked and can't find your story. Would you be so kind to post a link to the story/stories.
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It may not be posted yet, as it's the new version. Manual posting takes some time, they tell me.
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Paolo wrote: Sun Aug 12, 2012 8:33 am I still don't know how that happened, because I remember reading it more than once, so it was on the server at some point in time. :(

It might also be at wayback
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The original has returned. C van D is also working on an updated version for all of us to enjoy.

"Mistaken Paternity - Original Version" by C van D (https://eunuchworld.co/s13844) [Bi] [Minor] [Testicles]
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Excellent read! Just starred it!
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It might also be at wayback

I see Kristoff uses Mr. Peabody's Wayback Machine too.
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