I just read it and was really quite impressed.
There is a lot of effort put into this piece and it reads easy. A fine story with a decent ending.
You really put some thought into this one, and it's truly appreciated!
Thanks for posting this to the boards, I hope you find lots of stuff that tickles your fancy (and anything else you like tickled) in return
:Dhttps://eunuchworld.co/s13825