Appointment with Fate

[Asian Master (imported)]

That's the best little story I read in the Archive since some time, well written, with a bit of humour but not so humoristic to be unexciting. End pleasurably sarcastic about the fate of the lad and the vanity of his former preoccupation. Amusing narrative structure with the multiple voices and flashbacks. Among the recent stories, only the three by Dewi made my dick harder. Very entertaining to use the boy's preoccupation about his skin problems to trap him. One can only regret to not have more details about Simon's transport, awaking and discovering of new body status, then breaking and life as a slave serving his Asian master. A more personal regret: the choice of castration rather than penectomy to subjugate the boy (but of course it would have make the joke about the cure of the skin problem rather less amusing). A more personal recognition to have chosen the name Simon, which is the name of one of my best white college buddies: it was great to picture the story happening to him. Please, do it again.

Mikael

[Pueros]

Many thanks, Asian Master, for your kind comments.

To clarify a couple of your points:-

1) Much more about poor Simon's experiences will be revealed in the promised sequel, provisionally entitled 'Appointment With Destiny'.

2) Castration, as opposed to penectomy, was chosen because it was thought more pertinent to the cure of the boy's hormonal problems.

PUEROS

[Asian Master (imported)]

Thanks Pueros for your answer. I'm curious to read the next part of the story: I hope it will come back on the last episodes of the first part to which is only allude at the end. I understand well that castration was more coherent from a narrative point of view: it is only that my personal fantasy is more about white slaveboy loosing is cock but not his balls. But the story is great as it is, and I like the tone very much: please give us a new chapter.

Mikael

[Pueros]

Yes, Asia Master, in the promised sequel I shall give a better description of Simon's very early life as a eunuch, including his transportation from his homeland to his new master in China!

Alas, computer problems (now cured) have caused me a loss of 6 days' part-time writing. I'm therefore behind the planned schedule for all tales. However, I now hope that 'Appointment With Destiny' will be here sooner rather than later!

PUEROS