A Rough Story Idea

[bobover3 (imported)]

Oedipus Altered

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A suggested story outline -

Teen son flirts with mom, resents dad.

Mom seems to encourage son.

Assignation made.

Son arrives, mom seductive, arouses son to max.

Just as son about to consummate, dad appears.

Mom and dad laugh at son, tell him he’s worthless, they love one another, not him.

Dad rapes son while mom holds him, mockery of son.

Son’s prostate massaged to force out his last load, they make him eat it.

Mother castrates son by kneading and crushing his balls in her hands, he screams and faints and is revived.

Son kept chained in dark cellar forever, while parents say he’s left for college.

Finally they forget him and he dies of starvation in the dark.

From the earth above his secret crypt, a beautiful and hardy flower grows and spreads its seeds.

I would be thrilled to read this story. I am prevented from doing it myself by the torrent of dark emotion it would unleash in me.

[gunnutz (imported)]

I like the outline, not really my cup of tea but I would enjoy reading it.

I find that all of my decent stories come from exercising my demons, on the other hand they end up being to personal to share.