New Penectomy Stories?

[jearns1985 (imported)]

HEY ALL!

I'm back! (Well we all are)

As they are restoring stories, I'm going to start writing some more. If you have any suggestions, please list them here! I'd like to get a few new ideas out.

I usually specialize in gay penectomy stories, mostly because that is my interest!

So please give me some good suggestions penectomy fans!

[gil13579 (imported)]

I'm a big fan of wife or gf penetomy stories, somekind of fantansy taken to a level the guy wanted but didn't expect, like a few of the paper cutter stories that used to be on the board

[C&TL2745 (imported)]

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I usually specialize in gay penectomy stories, mostly because that is my interest!

Okay, just to get the creative juices flowing, let's assume the guy is gay. Are there other constraints you'd like to impose? For example:

1) What is the guy like, and why should we care about him? Is he a nice guy, a criminal (what kind?), a spy, a terrorist, a cantankerous old codger?

2) How old is he and what does he do as an occupation? Is he a student, a middle-aged factory worker, a newspaper reporter, a handyman, a mail carrier, a soldier?

3) Is the penectomy desired, dreaded, a fantasy he doesn't really want fulfilled, an accident that he wasn't even thinking about in advance, the result of an unrelated crime?

4) Is the one who removes the penis the guy himself, a friend, a gay lover, a rival, a female stranger, his mother or other relative, a girlfriend whom he's just told that he's gay, a group of straight guys, homophobic skinheads, a straight guy he was trying to hit on, a girl he doesn't know, a group of women, a doctor, a nurse, the CIA, the penal system, a drug lord?

5) Is the motive for the cutting revenge, an (intended but possibly misdirected) act of kindness, amusement of the cutter, pure evil, pure accident, unrelated crime, a mistake, an operating-room error, spite for something he did or failed to do, punishment for a crime, torture to extract information from him, a case of mistaken identity?

6) How is the penis removed: by a knife, in a hospital operating room, in playtime-gone-bad (banding left on too long, etc.), by gunshot, by fire, by fireworks (firecracker taped to the penis, "sparkler" inserted into the urethra and lit, etc.), a cheese grater, an injection, acid, an axe, a guillotine, a bomb, a razor blade, a straight razor, string or dental floss?

7) Does the guy know in advance that it's going to happen? If so, how does he feel about it: anxious to get it over, terrified, looking forward to it, apprehensive, feeling trapped into it (e.g., blackmail, lesser of two evils), ambivalent?

8) How does the penectomy change him (other than the obvious): Is he more compassionate or accepting of others, bent on revenge, driven mad, made depressed or suicidal, elated to finally be free of a hated appendage, filled with rage, determined to make the best of things?

9) What other central characters have key roles in the story? His parents, close friend(s) (gay, straight, bisexual, no interest in sex), a nemesis or rival, a criminal, a mysterious stranger, a lover (gay or bisexual), a cop, a doctor?

10) How would you describe his relationships with others? A loner, life of the party, a good loyal altruistic friend, a control freak, a moocher, a moralistic boor?

Pick one from column A, one from column B, one from column C, etc., and you've got the outline of a story.

Just as important as the plot is the point of view. Whose story it it? That is, from whose perspective is the story told. It is usually most effective if the "narrator" of the story sees everything from the eyes of just one person. He knows what that one person is thinking, feeling, seeing, etc., but for other characters, he can only report what they say and do. The person from whose perspective the story is told might be the fellow's friend, the cutter, a cop investigating the case, a doctor who's trying to stop the bleeding, a TV reporter treating the case as a story for the 10:00 pm news, etc. The viewpoint character might be the guy himself, but he could be any character in the story, and not necessarily a key character. Also, the story can be written in first person ("I saw; I cut; I felt") or third person ("He saw; he cut; he felt"). The writer should be consistent in this. If the viewpoint character is not the guy who loses his penis, the story might focus, not on the guy who lost his penis, but on the viewpoint character himself or some other character who came into contact with that guy--how did the experience affect him (or her)? How was he (or she) changed? For example, the story might be written from the perspective of the guy's mother. She sees that her son's been mutilated, and now she's bent on revenge.

So with these combinations, there are probably several hundred stories here. Choose one and start writing

Sandi

[Milkman (imported)]

I think the story would be most interesting from the perspective of the guy loosing his penis... his thoughts, motivations and reactions during such a traumatic process....

[bandedinme (imported)]

adult penectomy stories do it for me, forced, or otherwise

[C&TL2745 (imported)]

Another consideration: Is the penectomy the climax of the story that the first 90% of the story leads up to, an event in the middle of the story that changes the guy, or an event right at the start so that the story really revolves around how he deals with it?

An example of the first case might be where the guy is shown having intense pride in his penis. His whole life is shown to be centered on what he can do with it, and in the process he hurts others who decide on revenge by taking the one thing that most fuels his ego.

An example of the second case might be where the guy has a gay lover with whom he has a close relationship, which is developed in the story. Then midway through the story, he's found to have penile cancer and has to have it surgically removed. The rest of the story deals with the changed relationship--maybe it gets better, maybe it breaks up.

An example of the last case might be where cops are investigating the mutilation of a gay man by a gang of homophobic rednecks.

One other thought comes to mind. Usually the best stories come from one's own experience. As a woman, I have to rely on my husband for story ideas and critique. I love to write, but I would have no idea whether what I write is realistic without his collaboration. He'll tell me, "Geez, Sandi, no guy's going to say that!" and I end up throwing away pages of stuff. I can never fully relate to what it's like to lose something I've never had. He's the one with the penis and the penectomy fantasies. In the same way, a straight guy probably can't write a really compelling story about a gay guy and vice versa any more than a guy who's never been outside New York City can write realistically about life on a farm in Nebraska.

Sandi

[wannabe (imported)]

would be nice for a refresh of stories to see whats going on in everyones minds ..... for me though im not gay sooooo dont forget the straight ones too!

[JayBttmBB (imported)]

I find the gay, MtF and bisexual stories of young adult to mid age adult penectomy and nullification to be extremely erotic. Also, stories with genital mods leading up to penectomy or nullification are great. Stories including submission along with all of the aforementioned subjects are always very erotic. A great example being "Seth" from the old story archive. That was a very hot story to read. I personally find the archive stories to be motivational material as well in regard to the adult age stories. Although I am interested in mostly just the subjects that I have mentioned I would like to say that I do respect that everyone has their own favorite subjects they enjoy reading in regard to the archive. I look forward to seeing more stories in the near future. Perhaps it would be possible to continue showing the old non formatted archive stories and allow people to post new stories as well while the process of reformatting the old stories is in progress? I know I'm not the only person who is missing the archive and it's volume of selection in the mean time. Please understand that, while I make these requests, I do fully appreciate the work being done on the site and am very grateful for everything that is being done with it. Thank you for all of your hard works!!!

[Devwriter (imported)]

I prefer stories where the penectomy happens somewhere in the middle. It's a good balance, it gives you enough time in the beginning to give the characters a solid background and gives you enough room at the end to explore how they react to the penectomy.

[outfielder415 (imported)]

I would love to see all of the older stories on Penectomy restored. I wrote about five stories myself. Have a Mistress Julia who is in most of the stories. Tried to copy real things W/we have done. She did many things to my cock and balls but for me so far a Penectomy is still just a fantasy. Thanks, Jim