Freedom

Slammr (imported)
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Re: Freedom

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I didn't see in the story where Kim had become pumped up with female hormones, but the story has taken a different turn from what I had expected from the original story. We might need to call this one of many possible outcomes of the original story. What I've seen of the rest, it takes an even darker turn, and those that were happy with the first story might not want to read this one. They might not like where it takes them.
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