Roddy Evens the Score

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Roddy Evens the Score

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Barring accidents you will shortly find my latest effort on the archive. Here are a few notes.

1) The idea of "boy-brides" came chiefly from a hentai cartoon showing a nubile 12-year-old, all dressed in white satin, lace &. with a large dildo being forced up his butt. It was a very powerful image. Combined with this I read an uncorroborated report some months ago of a wedding in one of the Gulf states where the bride was a preteen boy.

2) Having invented the character of Daniel a bit back I thought he was too good to waste. Besides this, the epilogue to "Every Single Day" suggested we hadn't heard the last of him.

3) The sequence where Roddy actually allows the neutering of the child-actor to go ahead, develops an idea that began in "Roddy's Vacation Job". Given the opportunity of sex with any number of beautiful girls, who are crazy about him, Roddy now regrets the decision he took to get his balls pricked at age 13 (see Simon and Melanie Part II)

Hope this is of interest to readers.
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Thanks for another great story.

Nice to see Daniel back, and interesting to see a different side of Roddy.
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Loved the story. I particularly liked that Daniel managed to retain his sanity throughout his horrible ordeal.

I'm working on a story myself, that has a touch of the middle east thrown in. I've been doing some research, and it is true. The truth is stranger than fiction. The middle east and Asia have a very different value structure. especially for the super rich.

The average person in the middle east is no more going to have a harem than I am. The super rich though, well the laws don't apply to them.

It's good to read your stuff. You are a very accomplished author, and I always enjoy your stories.
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Cainanite (imported) wrote: Tue May 31, 2011 10:53 pm Loved the story. I particularly liked that Daniel managed to retain his sanity throughout his horrible ordeal.

I'm working on a story myself, that has a touch of the middle east thrown in. I've been doing some research, and it is true. The truth is stranger than fiction. The middle east and Asia have a very different value structure. especially for the super rich.

The average person in the middle east is no more going to have a harem than I am. The super rich though, well the laws don't apply to them.

It's good to read your stuff. You are a very accomplished author, and I always enjoy your stories.

You are more generous than I deserve. After all it was you who invented the original Dr Geller (see "How to Make a Cherub") whom I then proceeded to hijack, identify with the anonymous storyteller in "Tommy was my first experience in selling a slave" and then launch in a whole series of adventures.

I'm pleased that you liked "Roddy Evens the Score" and look forward to your Middle East story.
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C van D --

Allow me to add my thanks also.

I've had a few ideas for Simon's universe take root in my brain. Any chance you could turn on PM's for a few days so I can pass one along?
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I enjoyed this story, one more in the growing adventure collection of Simon and his friends!

I can VERY well understand Roddy waiting that little while, from how you characterized the little movie star.

Thanks!
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C van D (imported) wrote: Wed Jun 01, 2011 11:18 pm You are more generous than I deserve. After all it was you who invented the original Dr Geller (see "How to Make a Cherub") whom I then proceeded to hijack, identify with the anonymous storyteller in "Tommy was my first experience in selling a slave" and then launch in a whole series of adventures.

I'm pleased that you liked "Roddy Evens the Score" and look forward to your Middle East story.

You are perfectly welcome to Doctor Geller. You took her in a very different direction from what I might have.

As to my upcoming story... if I can finish it (It is practically a novel), the characters won't be travelling to the middle east. The middle east will have a big impact nonetheless.

I'd like your permission to mention or involve a character of yours, if you would allow it. It would be more or less a passing mention, but I have the perfect spot for it. It wouldn't violate your story line or continuity, but I'd like to pay homage, if you'd allow it.
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gellyfregy (imported) wrote: Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:50 pm C van D --

Allow me to add my thanks also.

I've had a few ideas for Simon's universe take root in my brain. Any chance you could turn on PM's for a few days so I can pass one along?

Pleased you liked it. Don't know what PM's are or how it might be used. Can't you use this forum?
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Cainanite (imported) wrote: Fri Jun 03, 2011 9:04 pm You are perfectly welcome to Doctor Geller. You took her in a very different direction from what I might have.

As to my upcoming story... if I can finish it (It is practically a novel), the characters won't be travelling to the middle east. The middle east will have a big impact nonetheless.

I'd like your permission to mention or involve a character of yours, if you would allow it. It would be more or less a passing mention, but I have the perfect spot for it. It wouldn't violate your story line or continuity, but I'd like to pay homage, if you'd allow it.

You are very welcome to borrow one of mine - that would be only fair. Not only that, but my latest story involves "Agent Swearingen" who came from the brain of my boss Paolo in "Ricky Visits America". He is too nice a guy even to have mentioned the theft!!!
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Il Musico (imported) wrote: Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:08 pm I enjoyed this story, one more in the growing adventure collection of Simon and his friends!

I can VERY well understand Roddy waiting that little while, from how you characterized the little movie star.

Thanks!

Nothing to do with the story, but with your workname. Have you kept up with UK news and the TV series "Britain's got talent"? Much news-space given over to a 12 year old called Rowan Something, embarking on a singing (boy soprano) career at the age of 12. Short of a surgical operation that I needn't specify, his career might be over in a year!!!
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