Need someone to check my story

[Mikurion (imported)]

First, hello everybody,

Until now, I'm writing a story for the EA Fiction Archive, but I'm not sure, if it's good or bad written.

Now, I need someone, who wants to check my story.

He/She must be able to read german, otherwise there would be no sense sending my story to him/her.

It would be realy nice if there would be a volunteer for reading it, bevor it will be online.:-\

[Dereknor (imported)]

Hi,

I would like to read it, I'm from germany, so I can understand it