Casey

[Paolo]

This is a GREAT read with a new spin on the topic! I loved it, and can't wait to see a bit more ... I hope ... please?!

[colin (imported)]

Paolo,

I have to agree about a new twist on an old theme. It shows a really inventive mind and all one can do is to hope that this is the first of many.

Well done, Tom.

LOL

[PB (imported)]

A great idea beautifully written. You have a deft, light touch worthy of comparison with Kortpeel at his best.

PB

[spud (imported)]

Aww... Gosh. You just make me feel so good. Especially you, PB, I've always admired your stories.

I'm writing the story as a whole but will publish it in parts as I get the time to write. Being able to buy food is a good thing, and I dare not jeopardize that by writing when I must work.