The Tribes, Chapter 23

[Charlieje (imported)]

Another great one, Androboy! I just wish you wouldn't leave us hanging like that (just kidding).

This chapter, to me, illustrates once more that even if such a calamity as befell the heros of Tribes actually happened, the world would survive because there are people like the Shiprats and the Farm Tribe in the world. Well done, androboy!

[Paolo]

Androboy, My hero!

:p

God, what I wouldn't give to be 14 and a character in that story, just to get closer to Jack ...

[androboy (imported)]

Androboy, My hero!

:p

God, what I wouldn't give to be 14 and a character in that story, just to get closer to Jack ...

thanks again charlie and paolo -- praise from two fantastic writers like you two is simply wonderful.

i broke my normal writing routine of not reading new stories to catch up on your harry potter story -- it's amazing, paolo. i am a dedicated harry potter fan and i love this series even more the the original stories. can't wait for more.

david

p.s. -- paolo, chapter 24 is moving right along. when it is submitted, pay a little extra attention to it. you'll find a surprise.

d

[colin (imported)]

Just to add my two penn'orth.

Well done right up to your usual standard.

LOL