My Story (minor penectomy)

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gandalf (imported)
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My Story (minor penectomy)

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Just came across this story by Wantitoff. I enjoyed the story very much. I guess it is because when I was about 4 or 5, my siblings and I were roaming on the farm and I had to pee. My older brothers told me to go off the road we were walking on and pee. So, I did. Alas, there WAS an electric fence where I started peeing. I never peed so much ion my life. The pee carried the current into me . Sorry to say, the experience did not affect me the way is did the boy in the story. All I did was bawl and PEEEE. Ah, sweet memories of growing up in the country.
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Re: My Story (minor penectomy)

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You inspired me to read this one, which was very well written. The story was tight, with few errors, and totally believeable.
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