The White Van Cometh By: Josh

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Maybe Toby will go to a support group for boys who have lost their dicks. Several boys could tell how and why they were penectomized. Some could say they played the game one time thinking they would not lose. Some found the game so exciting they could not quit. Some were forced to play by their parents until they lost. Some were taken by the white van. Some were taken to a clinic for a checkup and went home dickless. Maybe one went to the hospital for an appendectomy and when he woke up from the surgery, his dick was gone.

Most boys could have been trimmed because they masturbated too much. One could be trimmed because his older brother got a girl pregnant. One could have been penectomized because he let men suck his dick.

Maybe the support group could go to a nude beach. Toby would agree because he will have to shower with complete boys after P.E. soon. It would be easier the first time with other trimmed boys. Maybe he is surprised to see that many of the boys at the nude beach are trimmed or smooth.
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Hi CG

I have a number of ideas for the next chapter. But realistically, even if we lived in a world that didn't attach such a stigma to castration, I think very few boys would actually be willing to play this game. I'm sure quite a few would be interested but I think very few would take a seat in the saddle.

Josh:)
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Josh Goodman (imported) wrote: Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:55 pm Hi CG

I have a number of ideas for the next chapter. But realistically, even if we lived in a world that didn't attach such a stigma to castration, I think very few boys would actually be willing to play this game. I'm sure quite a few would be interested but I think very few would take a seat in the saddle.

Josh:)

That is certainly true but there could be cases in which the boy's parent (or parents) wants him to be penectomized. The parent could give the boy a choice of being taken by the white van and getting a penectomy or playing the game three, four or five times. The boy would chose the game because he would have a chance of keeping his dick. He would also get the excitement of playing the game.
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Josh, I do not think you should be too concerned with being realistic. Most of the stories on the EA are not very realistic, including most of my stories. Maybe the people who sponsor the game could start paying boys $100 to $400 each time a boy plays. The amount could increase each time a boy plays ($100 the first time, $200 the second etc.). That is a lot of money for a young boy. It could make more boys willing to play.

You never said if boys could play without their parent's consent.

We know why Gordy and Toby played. Maybe you could do a story about why the other four boys played. Were they forced by their parents? Was it the first time they played? Were they planning to play again? If one of the twins had lost, would the other play again? Would he play until he also lost so that they would be the same?
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Hi C.G.

I'm working on some new chapters. Boys can play the game without parental consent and they can be entered into the game by caregivers such as boarding school headmasters. Your idea of having them paid each time they play and the amount double on each successive game has a lot of potential and I think I'll find a way to work that in. Thanks!:)

Josh
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I was thinking more of it going up by a $100 each time. If it doubled each time and a boy managed to play six times, he would get $6,400 for the sixth time. That could get very expensive for whoever is paying for the game.
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Josh, may I use your game in one of my stories? I will not use any of your characters.
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i just wanna know more details about in the white van.what's happen after our hero was taked by the white van?
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Hi C.G.

I'd really be realy happy if you wrote some stories with the same penectomy game. I'd like to read them. But you don't have to stick to the same rules I used in my story. There might be more than one place where the game is played and if so different places might have different ways of playing. Feel free to give it your own spin.

Josh:)
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Seems like I gotta give this series a read =)
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