The American Prince

[Erik (imported)]

I hardly ever read a story that is posted in parts until the story is fully posted, but I was board so I read the first three parts to this story. I must say this is so far one of the great stories on the board, and I look forword to the rest of this story.

Kepp up the great work.

[Charlieje (imported)]

Thanks, Erik. I am going to try to get the entire 18 chapters posted before I leave on a week's vacation this coming Saturday. Paolo and Bboy, please don't feel obligated to put all the chapters up as soon as they are posted... I just thought it would be a good idea to "flood" the queue rather than making everyone wait a week.

[Bboy]

Holey smokes! This is a hot one boys!

I had to run over here and post right away, and was glad to see Erik had even beaten me to it!

LoL .. don't worry about 'flooding' the queue! I just am about to explode because you stopped at Chapter 7!!!!!!!

READ

THIS

STORY!!!

[Charlieje (imported)]

OK, Bboy, ya got me!

You know I can't refuse you. I just posted Chapter 8. (Bboy is a spoiled brat!!!!)

[A-1 (imported)]

...I don't read stories here with a "G" rating...

But this is an exception, I suppose. This story is an exceptionally well written one.

I really feel sorry for its characters, though.

Although I have not read the first parts of it will finish it.

Charlieje, you could certainly become a published author if you so desired. You are talented. I don't think that any mainstream publishing company would ever touch this subject matter, however.

STORY ON!

A-1

[jab (imported)]

I have to agree. Multipart stories aren't normally to my taste, but the pacing on this makes it work pretty well.

And yes, the boys in the story are a sad lot, there's no question.

It's not pretty, the situation described in the story, but it is very nicely documented.

[Charlieje (imported)]

Well folks, thanks for the feedback.

I really do apologize to the Management for the rapid fire posting, but I decided that would be better than the first few chapters, then nothing for a week. Now I really AM done for a week or two. I am expecting the 3 grandchildren any minute now, we are all going to the local stock car races tonight, then it's a week in beautiful downtown Myrtle Beach.

MAN I love this country!!!!

[autoloukos (imported)]

absolutely and without any doubt one of the greatest stories on this board

[Tanish (imported)]

Charlieje,

I hope you enjoy your time off very much - as much as I enjoyed reading through your excellent story this whole day long!

Your theme is a serious and sad one though I doubt it is that very far from reality - except that the nice little muslim country doesn`t exist, does it?

It is so nice to read a story that consists of more that a few introducing sentences, a loooong bloody emasculation and some words to put an end to ist.

I like it very much that you took your time describing the developing plot and the growing relationships between the characters.

Thanks for this great work.

I hope you will write something equally exciting and arousing again soon.

Tanish

[androboy (imported)]

Charlie,

"the american prince" is simply beautiful ... it is a fantastic story, wonderfully written and presented. i love it.

david