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Circle of Friends

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[FONT="Georgia"]Hi BullGator,

I loved your story

Happy Trails,

Casie
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Well, I know my stories have been loaded up with typos, so I apologize about that. Always looking for constructive criticism, especially as I have embarked on a series of sorts. Just a fantasy, really. But I remember some one asked for pain years ago, and my best read story, Club CBT was born. So maybe there is something that you would like.
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You might consider Open Office. Spell check isn't foolproof, but it helps a lot.

An excessive amount of typos that causes difficulty in reading the story will cause it to get rejected.
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Thanks Paolo, I will consider that in the future.

I also should give a shout out to other greats on the archive who have been a model: Chad Addison, Zoroaster, Nathan, Zipper, Artistic License, and many an Anonymous writer. Sorry if I left you out, I've been following the archive for a long time now, and I appreciate the work that most all the writers have been put into it.
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BullGator (imported) wrote: Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:19 pm Well, I know my stories have been loaded up with typos, so I apologize about that. Always looking for constructive criticism, especially as I have embarked on a series of sorts. Just a fantasy, really. But I remember some one asked for pain years ago, and my best read story, Club CBT was born. So maybe there is something that you would like.

Hey,

I really like your Club CBT story, one of my favorites

more versions/sequels of this story with similar story line would be great!

good author, wish you wrote more stories!!😄
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Thanks Jearns, I read your stories as well! You should write more too. I have another forthcoming in Circle...maybe I will go back and do another for CBT, I have thought about that before.
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Well the latest Circle story, Guyana, is up. I think is pretty good, although I sense alot of my readers lost interest in Circle after News from the Front bored them to tears - I just love news themes, so I had to. Anyways, I'm going back to Club CBT next. I just hope I don't ruin a good thing.
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Series and novel-length works often lose readers. That's just how it is. Don't feel bad about it.
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