BUT....
I will not be reading any more of it. I just cannot believe any adult male could be as stupid as our hero seems to be. For the past 2 or 3 chapters I have finished reading with only two thoughts in my head: (1) "That bitch!" and "Why don't you wake up, you idiot!"
I'm sorry - perhaps if was personally into pain I could get into this story, but I'm not, so I will simply say a sincere THANK YOU for a good effort, but it's not the type of story that does anything for me.