Separation Anxiety (by caultron)

[Prudence (imported)]

Great story, Caultron!

I really liked this story so far (right now only part 1 is posted)... It is similar to some of the fantasies I had as a kid and teen. This story is definitely a "keeper" for me. I'm anxiously awaiting the next part to find out what will happen.

Keep up the good work!

[Paolo]

It reminds me of the video about the boat, "Well, the front fell off!"

It just fell off!

When I was much younger, I was involved with a woman who had a son about this age. He used to have bad dreams about it "falling off" in the bath.

Made me think of him, and I've not seen him in ages.

Raising that one sure was a rough time, too, but I digress.

Very good capture of the age of the hero by the writer.

[theGelded1 (imported)]

Reminds me of a few fantasies of my own as a youth. Strange dreams those were, hadn't thought about them in ages

[StefanIsMe (imported)]

Gelded, exactly. This one really brings out thoughts I had as a school-kid.

Very good work, Caultron. I'm enjoying this a lot! I really like the clothing aspect... the boys are just naturally progressing, fairly quickly, into a state of neutrality, style-wise; can't wait until the protagonist shows up in class wearing proper, simple tights with a t-shirt.

Chapter two is up!

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/S/ea_233308separati.htm

[Paolo]

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/S/ea_00937separati.htm

Part 3.

Well done, too, with a bit of a mystery.

[bella (imported)]

enjoying this series very much

I have read up to part 6 so far

Interesting as to how quickly situation is accepted - I am curious to find out what caused it.

[caultron (imported)]

enjoying this series very much

I have read up to part 6 so far

Interesting as to how quickly situation is accepted - I am curious to find out what caused it.

I don't really have a specific "cause" in mind. Maybe it's some sort of global-ecological or Gaia-related response to overpopulation, similar to what happened in M Night Shamalan's movie, "The Happening."

I'm sure people were mad and panicy as hell when the phenomenon started, but as it affects more and more people, what else are they going to do? At the time of the story, there are enough of them to form a subculture.

In any event, keep watching. I have at least two more chapters in the works.

Most of all, thanks for the feedback! And if you (or anyone else) has ideas for more plots or subplots, I'd love to hear them.

caultron

[bella (imported)]

another good installment (#8)

please keep them coming

just a suggestion,,,, maybe something could start to happen to the females as well!

[caultron (imported)]

another good installment (#8)

please keep them coming

just a suggestion,,,, maybe something could start to happen to the females as well!

Thanks and yeah, it's definitely hard to keep writing these things and not get repetitious. So females are definitely a possibility, but in what way? Would their breasts fall off but need to be "fed" every so often?

It's hard to imagine a pussy falling off. I suppose a vagina could grow over, but what about all the stuff still inside?

Shemales are a possibility but somewhat off-topic for the Eunuch Archive.

Hmmm.

Or how could girls change so they'd produce arousal in a flat guy? It seems Troy is arousing girls without requiring contact...

Thanks for commenting, though, and for the inspiration. At least one more chapter is in the works.

caultron

[curious_guy (imported)]

I would like to read a separation story about two, gay, 13-year-old lovers who get separated from their bits. Maybe the top gets separated first and then the bottom gets separated a few weeks later.