Playing Lukas Sorensen By: Justin Cumberland

[gandalf (imported)]

I have read many, but not all, chapters of this story. Some were enjoyable but the last one turned away from what it started out to be. This in just one of several stories I did not really warm up to. The writing is surperb and well thought out but with the turns it has taken, have left me not enjoying it as I first did.

[Macchiavelli (imported)]

A most frightening scenario...is it real now, or just playing in Matt's head?

I hope he gets to keep his tackle in the end...enough mutilation already. How can Matt go back to his parents? Does Mrs. Muller join the fray? What is Mr. Sorensens part in the plot? Will Matt end up as castrated pain punk?....

we shall see - I hope!

Good, if gruesome story!

[Sanosuku (imported)]

well, i did read the whole story... half hoping the last dozen chapters(after the accident) had been like a dream or coma or something cuz i really didn't like matthew getting treated as he did, a much as he might have deserved it. really, there were parts that got WAY too gruesome for my tastes but i just scanned those sections till it got past them...

All in all well written, very detailed and actually more true to life descriptions than most stories.. alot of the stories fail to mention or ignore the fact that a nonprofessional pentecomy and castrations won't be clean and easy cuts ^^ Very nice, and props to you ^^

[Macchiavelli (imported)]

The end was sort of an anti climax, a bit sudden the changes of plot and scenery since we left Matt in the dungeon. But that's only my 2 ct, not worth a thought. I did enjoy the writing and, as others already have pointed out, the characters in this story. The few loose ends leave the door open for a sequel in the future, don't they?

Keep up the good work, my praise to all the EA writers!

Thanks

[george2u2 (imported)]

Thanks for the story and again for the chapter index.

[flattoppp (imported)]

As a long time lurker and reader I have enjoyed the writing and story more than I have for a while. It is cool that there were three lenghty stories going at once that were written above the norm here. This and the others are dark and sometimes difficult to digest but for me a turn on and great read. I like several others got a bit lost on the last few chapters. I really hope to see more stories by Justin in the future. I did enjoy what was started by him in the past(sorry can't recall the name now). Congrats again on a great read.

I need to say that I am finding it a bit curious to see people on this board mixing fantasy worlds and interests with the fiction on here. Very little of the fiction on this board or much of the internet would be acceptabe in real life either due to morals or physical implausibility or impossibility. It is fiction and this is one of the better examples of it.