Hey Erik - working on some stories here. If you want to preview them, give advice, ask questions, send me a message here. Thanks.

Hey - I agree regarding descriptive detail: it's important for the story, characters, etc. I might as well make a plug for (some of) my stories, which I think have good (but not overwhelming) descriptions:

Cowboy Ben and Cowboy Ethan Get Punished for Being Hot

Cowboy Ian Gets Punished for Being ...