I am still not seeing the option to send a PM. I am at five posts now.

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thank you this is exactly what I wanted a beta reader for. I need some time to make the changes and then I will submit them to you via PM for a more detailed thoughts.

Sam looked down at his smartphone to confirm the address his wife had sent him in the text message. His wife had been pretty coy about what was going on at this date night. In the 18 years they had been married his wife had always done a good job of keeping him on his toes in life and the bedroom ...

I am looking for a Beta reader to help me polish up a story I would like to post.

I am a first time writer but a long time lurker here.

Moneyball is great movie but they needed more actually information about Bill James and sabermetrics.