I have a large number of stories that I have written with a couple of them published from before, but most only sitting on my drive. All of my stories are of a minor theme.

I appreciate any thoughts on them, and I would like to get them up to a decent quality for submission to the archive ...

That truck ending sounds very much like deus ex machina (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deus_ex_machina).

A deus ex machina (Latin for "god out of the machine"; plural: dei ex machina) is a plot device whereby a seemingly inextricable problem is suddenly and abruptly solved with the contrived and ...

The story involves boys that are nullified or castrated, but sexuality is not mentioned.

I am writing a story based on a minor theme.

Anyone interested in helping me make this the best story it can be?

- unikue.