Thanks for posting that. I am glad that you like the story, despite the rather dark theme. In that case, I will keep writing it. The story does not end here, and maybe some parts will be happier :)
Interesting that you liked the moment Jay takes flight. It was that moment he stopped to rest on the ...
Search found 7 matches
- Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:15 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: Flight of the Jay
- Replies: 1
- Views: 0
- Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:02 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: Simon Returns: Simon and his Consience Under the Earth
- Replies: 5
- Views: 0
Re: Simon Returns: Simon and his Consience Under the Earth
Just read the first one, and it filled in some blanks nicely, thanks. And wow, you have been writing this over a long time!
- Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:00 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: "Elite Acadamy Programme"
- Replies: 6
- Views: 0
Re: "Elite Acadamy Programme"
Thanks both for your comments. I think the story of how Alex eventually comes to forgive Jacob will need telling one day. Right now I am working on something quite different ... I am not sure about posting it up yet though.
- Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:24 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: "Elite Acadamy Programme"
- Replies: 6
- Views: 0
Re: "Elite Acadamy Programme"
Thanks Felix. You are the second person to ask about Tristan. I am not sure I can write his story just yet though. On the other hand, I definitely feel like returning to this world. I may write something completely different first though (somewhere I have all kinds of haf started stories that I ...
- Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:40 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: Simon Returns: Simon and his Consience Under the Earth
- Replies: 5
- Views: 0
Re: Simon Returns: Simon and his Consience Under the Earth
This was my first "Simon" story and I felt a bit like I had come in on the middle of it (which I had of course) but I wanted to say I liked your quality of writing very much. The prose could easily have been found in a professionally published work, rather than an Internet based story. In many ways ...
- Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:36 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: "Elite Acadamy Programme"
- Replies: 6
- Views: 0
Re: "Elite Acadamy Programme"
Thanks Stefan, for the link and your kind words. Also for your encouraging emails as I wrote this story.
I very much enjoyed writing it and getting feedback from people. I think I have something of the writer's bug now, and find that I have more ideas than time to write them all :) But I hope to ...
I very much enjoyed writing it and getting feedback from people. I think I have something of the writer's bug now, and find that I have more ideas than time to write them all :) But I hope to ...
- Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:33 am
- Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
- Topic: Story ratings/categorization
- Replies: 4
- Views: 6
Re: Story ratings/categorization
I liked the story "Boy castrated at 12" very much. Sadly the author, rambler, didn't write any more. I find it hard to find other stories that fit my weird tastes though. That is why I decided to write some of my own.