Ops, I had planed about that one yet.

"If you need help or advice with your story before you submit it to the Archive, post here to request it. Also, anyone who wants to be a beta reader, or needs a beta reader, can post here as well"

I wanted grammar adviser.

kk, thanks.

I put the manuscript on my blog entry.

I'm glad if you guys leave comments there

about where you couldn't understand what I wrote.

your one warning made me close my eyes and scream.



Yes, that's why I used the RED letter.

I know some of you would respond as that.

My story is about the man who trapped into the web of the monster spider.

And he was implanted the egg into his thing.

(...What do you use the verb about ...

I'm searching anyone who could check my grammar.

I tried to translate one of my original Japanese story to English,

and I'm not sure my work is understandable or not as I'm not native.

Especially, I'm scared "the TENSE" my 1st language won't care about it.

My story sandwiches the reminding of ...

Cainanite (imported) wrote: Wed Feb 01, 2012 1:59 am They will be on the new archive when it next updates. You're welcome.

Thank you very much.

"The Washer" By: Bagoas

"Leave Behind" By: R.

"Dealer, The" By: Zipper

I want them put on the new archive.

gareth19 (imported) wrote: Sat Jan 14, 2012 2:37 am Isn't Harrison Ford too old to play Ender?

I guess he is teacher...

I guess they'll cut off the most of the outside of ender's school-life, his siblings part.

Or, the siblings are just normal families. 2hrs are too short for the characters.

(And general USA parents hate them, I think)

I just hope they never build the movie as like the starship troopers...