You know, it's really uncommon for me to encounter an online fiction that's actually written and developed well enough for me to want to read it solely for the content. I'm really grabbed by this story, despite what little it has to do with my personal interests. I really appreciate how well thought ...

Unfortunately, I'm not enjoying this story anymore, either...I feel that the sequences beyond the mind control glasses were a little too dramatic and extreme.

The current scenario feels like it has completely abandoned the cat-and-mouse character interactions / fantasies in favor of what could be ...