I check to see if there is another chapter when I get home before I even check for messages and e-mails.

Keep the story "cumming"! :)

One suggestion though. Make sure you keep the character's names correct.

In this section, when you were first mentioning Peter to John, in the next paragraph you called John by the name of Peter. Took me a minute to reread and follow what had happened.

NO big deal ...

GET BACK TO YOUR TYPEWRITER.

I want to hear about the young doctor and the twins!

Anxiously awaiting the next chapters of your story.

It has all the elements I enjoy.

Keep the story going.

Is very intriguing!

I wasn't as concerned about the hearts as much as I am now about trying to log into the personals.

I have used 2 different names over a period of time. Neither one will let met enter the personals.

What is going on now?

A

searching1943 (imported) wrote: Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:32 pm ny clue when the personals might be up a

gain?

Do you have any clue when the personals might be up and running again?

Am sure lots of people are waiting for it.

Won't let me in either. Directly or through the archive.

Says is requesting a name and password to be entered in an UNSECURE WAY as well.

What gives?