You have a good start with this story through episode 5. The original premise, in which Tyler is repeatedly abused sexually and thereby muses about becoming nom-sexual, is an interesting twist.

In addition, there are plenty of questions to keep readers reading. Here are some that've occurred to me ...

Try Separation Anxiety by, uh, me, at http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/S/ea_175709separati.htm. It's similar.

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Write a story about a world in which mens' genitals separate easily from their bodies. A wrong move, over exertion, a blow can all cause a man's penis and testicles to just fall off ...

It could just take a while for the penis to mature enough to reach the next "reimplantation stage". A year the first detachments started and all the men are becoming infected with the penis symbiot of unknown origin the reimlantations start. After they impant and seal the vaginas, they end up ...

Read all the chapters and really enjoyed the story. I kind of envision it being caused by an alien parasite that gives a consiousness to the detatched penis.

Would be funny if the detached penis' started getting stuck in the girls and leaving them sealed up and smooth with some sort of phermonal ...

I would like to read a separation story about two, gay, 13-year-old lovers who get separated from their bits. Maybe the top gets separated first and then the bottom gets separated a few weeks later.



Thanks, I'll keep that concept in mind. Usually, though, I liketo keep my characters eighteen ...

another good installment (#8)

please keep them coming

just a suggestion,,,, maybe something could start to happen to the females as well!



Thanks and yeah, it's definitely hard to keep writing these things and not get repetitious. So females are definitely a possibility, but in what way ...

enjoying this series very much

I have read up to part 6 so far

Interesting as to how quickly situation is accepted - I am curious to find out what caused it.



I don't really have a specific "cause" in mind. Maybe it's some sort of global-ecological or Gaia-related response to overpopulation ...

This is definitely a fun story.

I presume that Peter, Josh, and everyone else at the camp will become nullos before any of them go home. But certainly, there are plenty of ways it could happen. Would they cut all the boys at once, or so many a day in alphabetical sequence, or by each boy was ...

Agreed, good story, but I too would like to see the origins.

Perhaps the coach could discover a temple pool or hidden spring inhabited by Adonis or Hermes, and swimming that pool could transform someone into the smoothest, sleekest swimmer in the world, although one aspect of that sleekness would ...

For sure, this is great concept and great story. Please keep it up!

Chapter after chapter of guys losing so-many percent would, of course, become repetitious. But there are plenty of related plots you could develop, such as:

- ways of attracting more players.

- what happens as parents, teachers ...