I agree with TopMan that a re-write isn't necessary - it just sounded like you had some of your own ideas you wish you would've added to the first installment. That said, these can always be addressed in a sequel!

I do think that it may be too convenient to just have the wolf show up to replace ...

Being part of the fandom myself at times in my life I enjoyed this one and gave it 5 stars as well.

If you don't plan to do a re-write (which I wouldn't mind since TopMan gave some excellent suggestions and it sounds like you aren't fully satisfied with the finished product) I'd be anxious to see ...

South Park fan fiction about castration might not be so farfetched. Do you remember the episode Ike's Wee Wee? At first the boys were horrified to learn about circumcision but only because they didn't understand it. Once they realized what it was they all wanted to be cir'ed.

I can see something ...

Paolo wrote: Fri Mar 09, 2018 10:27 pm Don't worry, I'm the sub. I'll check the box tomorrow night.

NEGATIVE. I am the sub. If anything, you are the DOM among SUBS xD

Pictures created with 3D modeling software, such as Poser, DAZ, Make Human, etc., are indeed legal in the USA. They might not, however, be legal in some other countries. Be aware of what the laws are in your area before you go clicking links!



Wish I knew how to +rep you Paolo. I hadn't thought ...

Um... Is that stuff legal? 🤷 🙃



Apparently, the US Supreme Court ruled on April 16, 2002 that adult material depicting minors but that was not made through the use of any actual minor is protected free speech. The ruling was against the Child Pornography Prevention Act of 1996 (CPPA) and the ...

If it's out there on some service that hasn't removed the images due to their TOS policy, go ahead and post the link with the appropriate warnings/tags. I know of a few that I've found on Deviantart.com .



The URL is:

http://damnd1.tumblr.com/archive

Searching through the blog posts you will ...

If you had the funds and a good artist, which story or plot you would have drawn as a cartoon? And why?

I think I would select Azyntion City plots of Nathan. I love the atmosphere in the city and different castration methods you can observe around the city.



There IS an artist that does ...

TopManFL (imported) wrote: Wed Jun 07, 2017 6:07 pm Charlie (sometimes short for Charlene) versus short for Charles.

Billy (William or Willamina )

Could use my name... Chris... or Christine... or like my family PERSISTED in calling me when I was younger to piss me off... CHRISSY

Is it this one?

https://eunuchworld.co/s199