Well-wrought story. I am not particularly interested in the insinuation that it reflects what is going on today. It is a fact of life, just like there are Muslims who want to kill us here in the USA. That is a fact of life, too. The story read very well even though the ending seemed a bit contrived ...

This is an elegantly wrought story, despite the setting and the subject matter. It moves quietly and sensitively. Structure is great; grammar is fine...all in all, a wonderful read. Very atypical of the Archive. Thanks, Slammr.

A very pleasant, readable story that held my interest, for which Erik is to be congratulated. Two thumbs up!