Bobbie,

You are right. I think I confused the bulletin board with chat. I never joined chat and probably don't really want that type of thing but who knows. I am glad that it appears many do like that feature. What I miss is the old times on the forum. I would hope that if Kristoff and I met in ...

Now I remember what the argument about me rejoining the forum was about. It must be that my M to F transition was working so well that I really got PO'd when I had to put down my date of birth on the re-application. Seems funny now in a way. But there is not a lot of forgiveness for things like that ...

This thread seems like a lame excuse to me. I was booted some years ago but for being disrespectful under the influence of strong hormones and not for cyber anything. I am still allowed to submit stories because some here like them, but I can not chat or post other than here. I miss it but it was my ...

I'm not so bothered about dangling participles.

What pains me most are split infinitives!

PUEROS



I confess that my personality is infinitely split.

Also, my participles have been known to dangle.

With the good feeback, I can try better to keep things together and tucked in.

- CB

P.S. to ...

Classy B.,

As far as I can tell your story is fine. Jessica is too far removed from any real person for that not to be a problem. Make sure your main protagonist is a real enough person for readers to identify with and you'll have a fine story.

You just pipped me though. I've been working on a ...

It is nice to see so much more feedback to stories here than there used to be. It could be the writers are better or the beta helpers are better or the editors are better.

Whatever the reason, it is good to see. Your helpful feedback is all the pay the authors need to keep up their fascinating ...

I need help with a story I've been working on. At first I wanted it to be a political parody, but now I think we've had quite enough of all that. The woman I was joking on is also someone I think was treated unfairly by the mainstream press. She does not need me to try my own lame jokes. I will ...

P,

Thanks for the note and comment. If possible, the second submission is a little better ("Cured by Pedicure" is the better) as the title and sub-title are better than the O' Canada En Garde idea, and the subject lives in the latter fantasy so I can write a follow-up.

Sorry that I submitted it ...

Very

Fucking

Amazing!

Is it OK

to say

Fucking?

If not,

I apologize

for saying

Fucking.

- CB

To "bitch" is bad?

... CB cries!