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by vorpalboy (imported)
Wed Feb 02, 2011 11:30 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: Caribbean Vacation- Part 1
Replies: 2
Views: 0

Re: Caribbean Vacation- Part 1

Really enjoyed both parts of this story. Sign me up to become a bottom, please!
by vorpalboy (imported)
Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:38 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: Infomercial
Replies: 2
Views: 0

Infomercial

This was fun! I've got my credit card ready, what's the number to call?
by vorpalboy (imported)
Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:35 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: "Alternates" By: scarysarah
Replies: 2
Views: 0

Re: "Alternates" By: scarysarah

Agreed, the possibilities here are intriguing. Cool story!
by vorpalboy (imported)
Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:51 am
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: How I got WAY better at sports
Replies: 2
Views: 0

How I got WAY better at sports

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/H/ea_105330how_i_go.htm

I liked the concept of this story, and the general enthusiasm for/growing popularity of getting trimmed. I wish I'd been able to get trimmed like that in high school.

Thanks, curious_guy and StefanIsMe.
by vorpalboy (imported)
Fri Nov 15, 2002 5:45 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: Walani Pt I
Replies: 1
Views: 0

Re: Walani Pt I

I really enjoyed this; you've done a great job of building up suspense and interest. Fantastic start! I'm looking forward to the next part.

vorpal
by vorpalboy (imported)
Thu Oct 17, 2002 5:32 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: Pin-Ball Willy
Replies: 8
Views: 0

Re: Pin-Ball Willy

Really wonderful story with a fantastic build-up. Great fun to read!

vorpal
by vorpalboy (imported)
Thu Oct 10, 2002 6:21 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: The Master of the Mansion
Replies: 4
Views: 0

The Master of the Mansion

I really enjoyed this one, cool idea and well-written, and I thought the idea of the guys not realizing at all what had happened was very cool. What would it be like to think you'd always been that way?

vorpal
by vorpalboy (imported)
Thu Oct 10, 2002 5:24 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: "Recreations 2080" reactions?
Replies: 2
Views: 0

Re: "Recreations 2080" reactions?

I thought this was really interesting and liked how a large part of it was told entirely through dialog. I wonder how long it will be before medical science allows us to so change our physical selves almost as easily as we'd change an outfit or hairstyle. So much for traditional gender roles!

vorpal
by vorpalboy (imported)
Sun Oct 06, 2002 6:14 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: Bradley's Cure
Replies: 12
Views: 2

Re: Bradley's Cure

I'm more than a little late to this, but I wanted to voice my agreement: this story was really well-written and a joy to read. I felt immediately involved with the characters, and at each step could hardly wait to find out what happened next.

Another great job!

vorpal
by vorpalboy (imported)
Mon Mar 18, 2002 5:25 pm
Forum: Story Reviews & Author Feedback
Topic: Bryan's Story by androboy
Replies: 2
Views: 1

Bryan's Story by androboy

Fantastic start, I thought, to this new version of Bboy's story! Lots of fun and interesting characters, and very well written. I really enjoyed it!

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